In my opinion the global warming something terrible that all are created. Since the tecnology started to grow,the pollution in our city, the rise of the sea levels etc. The horrible consequences in many aspects of our life. We are guilty even we don´t want to accept it.
Actually we can see that consequences in our planet, for example the changes of the weather so quikly,and because of that mortal hurricanes in many places of our country, people who are dying of hungry and sickness in Haiti for the big earthquake; or the animals wich are been affected and they die every day trying to fight for survive as the polar bears who are drowing because they have to swing longer dictances to find the ice.
that are some of the examples of these global warming, the damage is done, the only thing we can do is try to rescue the few valuable things that we still have and teach to our children to take care for our planet.
Magdalena Ortiz
I think it is well developed, it has a conclusion and a good main idea, but I think you need to work with the article "the", because I can see it many times during the text, also, there are some words which are misspelled, if you have any doubt abnout a word, try to find a dictionary. (quickly, drowning, swim,etc) and also some other mistakes, singular, instead of plural, or been, instead of been. But it's a great way to start, thanks for posting on time. Keep working, you're doing a great job!
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